Tuesday, 2 June 2015

Writing goal reflection

Writing
I have improved in using language features because now I am using them a little bit more in my writing. I have improved in it because now I am trying to remember by writing it at the top of the page. Miss Cooper sometimes says I use them.

The Clock tower prequel

Once upon a time there lived a girl who was sad and lonely. Her little cottage was as small as a orange. Well not exactly but you get the picture. All she did was sleep, eat, drink and dance. Her name was Lucy. Lucy taught her self ballet. Most of the time all you would hear was, " ooof," or " ouch." One day she was in her small cottage practising ballet when she suddenly spun out of control and hit a wall. Lucy looked down at her little feet. They were as lit up as New York at night. Lucy thought they were beautiful. She glanced up to see if she could find what lit up her feet. A small pane of glass was located at the top of the wall. But Lucy didn't know that. Lucy jumped under her bed and came out holding a box that looked like a overweight man who got rolled into a box. She used all her strength to push the box all the to the window. Lucy jumped up as high as she could and landed on the very top of the box. In front of her face a big white light shone. It was as white as a new piece of paper. Lucy went blind for 5 seconds. She fell backwards off the box. As Lucy opened her eyes she thought I need my bright light glasses. So she went and got them. Again she jumped as high as a kangaroo. Again she landed neatly on top of the box as if she were a gymnast. Now with her bright light glasses Lucy could see this mysterious thing. All that was there was a small pane as big as a pencil case. Next to it a small green button labeled 'open' was glued. Curiously Lucy gently tapped it. Nothing happened. Again Lucy tapped it but this time a bit harder. Clunky noises filled the room and slowly but steadily the pane opened. A little sparrow flew in from nowhere and landed on the windowsill. It chirped. Lucy jumped down and ran to a small purple door. Quickly Lucy ran out of the small purple door and followed the bird. It led her to a clearing in a jungle. All of a sudden a witch appeared. " I see  you followed the bird. And now you have ended up in my genius trap! Maw ha ha ha ha! Now I shall put you where you can dance all day! In a clock tower! Maw ha ha ha ha! Maw ha ha ha ha!" Zap! That is the story of how Lucy ended up in the clock tower.

Maths goal reflection

Maths
I have improved in my maths goal groupings within 1000 because I have been practising it at home and a little bit at home. I know I have improved in it because now I can do 10 questions in less than 2 minutes.